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The pieces below were composed in response to the following prompt:
* Please compose an advertisement using comparative and superlative adjectives. Also, be very descriptive to persuade your audience.
Surface Pro 3 by: Giulia Abraham
Hello, this is Giulia Abraham and I will be advertising the Surface Pro 3! The Surface Pro 3 is the newer Microsoft computer which includes a helpful touchscreen, stylus, Windows 8.1, a removable keyboard, long battery life, and is complete with OneNote capabilities. Not only that, but is equipped with colored keyboards, a kick stand, and a slick look for your enjoyment! These are just a few reasons why the Surface Pro 3 is better than any other computer out there.
One of the reasons why the touchscreen is helpful is if you need to quickly access something and you don’t want to take the time to use the mouse. All you have to do is “touch” the “button” you want to touch and watch the magic happen. The stylus is great for writing, drawing, selecting, erasing, and “clicking”. It assists you in “clicking” small “buttons”, objects, and more! Windows 8.1 helps you to download the newest data and the coolest apps! On top of that, Windows 8.1 gives you the most updated Word, OneNote, PowerPoint, Publisher, Excel, and many other of the newest things that Microsoft has provided for you to make your computer working the easiest in can be. Word is useful for documents, letters, invitations, flyers, and much more! OneNote is best for taking notes, planning events, or drawing. PowerPoint is helpful for making presentations. Publisher is used the most for brochures, and Excel is useful for money management. Also, the removable keyboard is helpful when you want to use your surface as a tablet or you need to remove the keyboard so it is not in your way when you draw or write with your handy-dandy stylus. The long battery life is very useful if you are using your Surface throughout the whole day. Then, if you need to do homework after school and you don’t have an outlet you will still have plenty of battery left. OneNote capabilities fall into the category of Windows 8.1. OneNote has outstanding, everlasting, new, advantageous, capabilities to help you be able to do what you need to do in regards to work, school, or just plain events you are planning at home. Moreover, the Surface Pro 3 was built for your amusement and convenience. So buy the Surface Pro 3, and see the difference between that and other computers within minutes!
One of the reasons why the touchscreen is helpful is if you need to quickly access something and you don’t want to take the time to use the mouse. All you have to do is “touch” the “button” you want to touch and watch the magic happen. The stylus is great for writing, drawing, selecting, erasing, and “clicking”. It assists you in “clicking” small “buttons”, objects, and more! Windows 8.1 helps you to download the newest data and the coolest apps! On top of that, Windows 8.1 gives you the most updated Word, OneNote, PowerPoint, Publisher, Excel, and many other of the newest things that Microsoft has provided for you to make your computer working the easiest in can be. Word is useful for documents, letters, invitations, flyers, and much more! OneNote is best for taking notes, planning events, or drawing. PowerPoint is helpful for making presentations. Publisher is used the most for brochures, and Excel is useful for money management. Also, the removable keyboard is helpful when you want to use your surface as a tablet or you need to remove the keyboard so it is not in your way when you draw or write with your handy-dandy stylus. The long battery life is very useful if you are using your Surface throughout the whole day. Then, if you need to do homework after school and you don’t have an outlet you will still have plenty of battery left. OneNote capabilities fall into the category of Windows 8.1. OneNote has outstanding, everlasting, new, advantageous, capabilities to help you be able to do what you need to do in regards to work, school, or just plain events you are planning at home. Moreover, the Surface Pro 3 was built for your amusement and convenience. So buy the Surface Pro 3, and see the difference between that and other computers within minutes!
Disneyland by: Jessica Finsh
Do you know why you should go to Disneyland? Well there is one reason why and it is because it is better and way more exciting than any other theme park out there. With all of its rollercoasters, gift shops, new rides, fancy hotels, and a beautiful castle to pull it all together, Disneyland is the most incredible place to be! There are long rollercoasters, short ones, and tall ones, but the one rollercoaster that is also the biggest rollercoaster in Disneyland is the “California Screamin’.” It is thirty-seven meters high and is as fast as sixty-two miles per hour—isn’t that insane! There are over fifty-five attractions at Disneyland and that is the highest number of attractions for any Disney theme park. Some attractions are Splash Mountain, Matterhorn Bobsleds, and Space Mountain. Some of the newest rides are Cars Land, Fantasy Faire, and Mickey and the Magical Map. With all of this amusement, who could not possibly go to Disneyland?
At Disneyland’s gift shop you will stroll out of the store with full bags of toys and clothes. Your children will beg you to purchase them a Cars toy or a princess dress! You will even buy yourself something to remind you of your childhood! At regular gift shops there are dirty toys and ugly ones too, but at Disneyland there are extremely high quality and clean toys. Your children will never want to let go of them! Now, I know what all of you parents are thinking, “If Disneyland is like the greatest resort ever, then it must be cost a fortune!” That is not the case. Disneyland is only $100 for a day in the happiest place on earth. With prices like these you might as well take a trip to Disneyland every single day of your life! The hotels in Disneyland are luxurious and perfect for your kids! They are cozy and fit up to four people. They are right in the Disneyland park, so don’t worry about having to find a hotel far away from Disneyland. Last and best of all, the royal Disneyland castle! The extraordinary castle that everybody wants to live in. You can explore the inside of the castle and it is the perfect place to take the perfect picture! Doesn’t all of this sound amazing! I would live at Disneyland and you should too! Now, hop on the plane and purchase a one way ticket to Disneyland, the happiest place on earth!
At Disneyland’s gift shop you will stroll out of the store with full bags of toys and clothes. Your children will beg you to purchase them a Cars toy or a princess dress! You will even buy yourself something to remind you of your childhood! At regular gift shops there are dirty toys and ugly ones too, but at Disneyland there are extremely high quality and clean toys. Your children will never want to let go of them! Now, I know what all of you parents are thinking, “If Disneyland is like the greatest resort ever, then it must be cost a fortune!” That is not the case. Disneyland is only $100 for a day in the happiest place on earth. With prices like these you might as well take a trip to Disneyland every single day of your life! The hotels in Disneyland are luxurious and perfect for your kids! They are cozy and fit up to four people. They are right in the Disneyland park, so don’t worry about having to find a hotel far away from Disneyland. Last and best of all, the royal Disneyland castle! The extraordinary castle that everybody wants to live in. You can explore the inside of the castle and it is the perfect place to take the perfect picture! Doesn’t all of this sound amazing! I would live at Disneyland and you should too! Now, hop on the plane and purchase a one way ticket to Disneyland, the happiest place on earth!
Jordan Super Fly 2 by: David Kim
If you are a marvelous basketball player but you don’t have appropriate shoes, why don’t you try the world’s most acclaimed basketball player Michael Jordan’s Jordan Super Fly 2!
Unlike other basketball shoes, Jordan Super Fly 2 are lighter than others. Also these Jordans are really tight so you can move around more comfortably and faster than before. Jordan Super Fly 2 are also so comfortable that your feet don’t hurt while you’re playing basketball. Lastly, the Jordan Super Fly 2 are the most amazing basketball shoes because the sole helps you to leap or dash and because of the softness of the sole reduces the impact.
So because of these three reasons I think Jordan Super Fly 2 are the most awe-inspiring shoes in the world.
Unlike other basketball shoes, Jordan Super Fly 2 are lighter than others. Also these Jordans are really tight so you can move around more comfortably and faster than before. Jordan Super Fly 2 are also so comfortable that your feet don’t hurt while you’re playing basketball. Lastly, the Jordan Super Fly 2 are the most amazing basketball shoes because the sole helps you to leap or dash and because of the softness of the sole reduces the impact.
So because of these three reasons I think Jordan Super Fly 2 are the most awe-inspiring shoes in the world.
Power Play by: Brooke Reynolds
Are you looking for an over-the-top place to just unwind and have a good time? Look no further than the Power Play Arcade! It has a great variety of games, such as: “Big Fish”, Air Hockey, “Cut the Rope”, and my all-time favorite, Ski Ball. Power Play is larger than your usual arcade, with about 70 games (I counted), a dining area, and an enormous prize counter full of wacky, huge, and the most entertaining prizes that I’ve won.
The best thing about Power Play is that instead of having thousands of those pesky tokens, you can buy a card that actually has digital tokens on it. Then you can just scan the card on the game, and you will be on your way. Another cool feature about Power Play is that you can order delicious food and drinks. I think that this feature really makes Power Play better than most arcades. You know when you walk into an arcade and it kind of smells like grease, YUCK, but Power Play is actually very clean and organized. It does not smell like yuck, does not look like yuck, and does not feel like yuck. My last compliment is on the prizes. They are actually worth your money! There are things like plasma globes, lava lamps, giant slinkies, and not to mention, candy. Those were the best prizes I’ve ever seen. I was so close to winning a ginormous box of nerds, but before I knew it, it was time to go.
So now you know: if you’re just sitting around doing nothing, get up, jump in your car, and head to Power Play!
The best thing about Power Play is that instead of having thousands of those pesky tokens, you can buy a card that actually has digital tokens on it. Then you can just scan the card on the game, and you will be on your way. Another cool feature about Power Play is that you can order delicious food and drinks. I think that this feature really makes Power Play better than most arcades. You know when you walk into an arcade and it kind of smells like grease, YUCK, but Power Play is actually very clean and organized. It does not smell like yuck, does not look like yuck, and does not feel like yuck. My last compliment is on the prizes. They are actually worth your money! There are things like plasma globes, lava lamps, giant slinkies, and not to mention, candy. Those were the best prizes I’ve ever seen. I was so close to winning a ginormous box of nerds, but before I knew it, it was time to go.
So now you know: if you’re just sitting around doing nothing, get up, jump in your car, and head to Power Play!
Disney Cruise by: Elise Germino
Do you want a vacation from stress, work, and cooking? Well then, it seems like the Disney cruise line is for you!
The relaxing, exciting atmosphere on the cruise brings out your inner child! It has everything! From lounges and premiere dining rooms, to pools and water slides. There is something there for everyone! It is the best cruise line that the world has ever seen! Not to mention you have the same servers for every night you're on the cruise. This means that you have a devoted waiter who caters only to you, no one else! The crew is always nice and the pool is always the right temperature! Even on a cruise to Alaska you can stay warm and cozy in the many pools and hot tubs all around the boat. There is even a kids only area, a middle school only area, a high school only area, and an adults only area!
I told you that the dining room was cool and colorful, but you have to taste the food to really get it! They serve every kind of food imaginable! Way better than other cruise lines who only have one restaurant! You enjoy a different, more colorful dining room every night! One is cartoon themed, it’s called the Artist’s Palette. There’s another that’s themed like an underwater world, based off of the Little Mermaid, and many more. However, whatever restaurant you get, you better believe it will be just as good, if not better than the night before! You meet all new people and dine with all new friends, all while sailing the seven seas in a luxury cruise boat! The service there rivals that of a 5 star restaurant! You don't want to miss being able to ride the world's finest boat! No matter what you think, the Disney Cruise Line is better than Princess cruises, Royal cruises, etc.! I plan on going there again and you should go there too! You'll regret when you're the only one left out of the fun (believe me, this is the most fun you will ever have)!! Book today at disneycruiseline.com/book.
The relaxing, exciting atmosphere on the cruise brings out your inner child! It has everything! From lounges and premiere dining rooms, to pools and water slides. There is something there for everyone! It is the best cruise line that the world has ever seen! Not to mention you have the same servers for every night you're on the cruise. This means that you have a devoted waiter who caters only to you, no one else! The crew is always nice and the pool is always the right temperature! Even on a cruise to Alaska you can stay warm and cozy in the many pools and hot tubs all around the boat. There is even a kids only area, a middle school only area, a high school only area, and an adults only area!
I told you that the dining room was cool and colorful, but you have to taste the food to really get it! They serve every kind of food imaginable! Way better than other cruise lines who only have one restaurant! You enjoy a different, more colorful dining room every night! One is cartoon themed, it’s called the Artist’s Palette. There’s another that’s themed like an underwater world, based off of the Little Mermaid, and many more. However, whatever restaurant you get, you better believe it will be just as good, if not better than the night before! You meet all new people and dine with all new friends, all while sailing the seven seas in a luxury cruise boat! The service there rivals that of a 5 star restaurant! You don't want to miss being able to ride the world's finest boat! No matter what you think, the Disney Cruise Line is better than Princess cruises, Royal cruises, etc.! I plan on going there again and you should go there too! You'll regret when you're the only one left out of the fun (believe me, this is the most fun you will ever have)!! Book today at disneycruiseline.com/book.